Thursday, October 14, 2010
Descriptive paragraph.
I walk up to the line of scrimmage, glancing out at my receivers. The slight breeze chills my skin, and the smell of sweat mixed with mud engulfs the air around me. Smoothly, I slide under center and take the snap. I drop back, looking over to the right. In front of me, linemen are colliding, grunts and screams escaping from their mouths. Excitement stirs up inside me. Jaron is running straight down the field, and he has beat his man. I rare back and fire the ball to him. The ball takes a high arc, spinning gracefully as it gets closer and closer to it's target. Jaron never stops as he catches the ball in stride. The crowd explodes as he sprints down the sideline. The defenders are close behind, desperately trying to chase him down, but to no avail. Jaron doesn't stop running until he reaches the endzone 66 yards later.
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After reading this I felt almost like I was standing there with you. The details told told the whole story. They gave me a better idea of what you were experiencing personally.
ReplyDeleteI really liked reading this. I always wondered what it was like down on the field lol. You chose really good adjectives too! Great Job
ReplyDeleteAddy P
Nice. I never realized what a rush it can be to play on the football field. Thanks to your great description, I have a glimmer of what its like.
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